Love it, love it, love it! Confident!Hermione and CompletelyAdorable!Harry (well, he is...), in particular. And the scene in the Boy's Dorm - wow... I didn't even feel cheated that it ended (or, faded to black, rather) when it did - it seemed perfectly natural. Loverly fic.
.... I knew it was going to be long, but I didn't expect it to be this long o_O
I'm currently at the beginning of Chapter 3 and loving every single word. I'm specially enjoying your version of Ron and his love triangle with Fleur and Lavender... I love your take on these characters. I don't remember you writing such a Ron-centric fic before, but I think is great.
Expect a more detailed review via e-mail as soon as I'm done. :)
That was the total bomb! So utterly fabulous, I love the way you write, it's fantastic in its own right, but you are also, without question, my favourite H/Hr writer.
O, how I love the characterisation in your stories, and how the mood is rarely too serious, there's a lightness to it, a similar kind of whimsy that's found in the books- I think that's the key right there, why your style has clicked so well with me. The dialogue is great too, I know when I'm reading that it wont be long before I'll have the giggles again (best example; "bags not taking his jocks off"- that's gold.)
Loved this story. I know all the previous fangirling doesn't do much else but look pretty, but I hope it at least encourages you to write more and more. :) I'm also friending you, to keep updated with your writing adventures. Thanks for sharing this!
Yeah I thought Ron deserved a bit of attention. I had all these ideas for Ron!Fic but I never really got it finished. Now I have and it's good to know I've done a bit for the redheaded git :)
Thank you so much for responding! *glows* Wow, the feedback for this has blown my mind!! I can't register what people are saying to me! *laughs* I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I've always had an easier time writing comedy (I'm a comic writer, it makes sense! LOL!) and while I do write angst from time to time, I really have the most fun with my laughs and my good times. I put a lot of my own life into how the characters act, which is probably why they're less than well-behaved, but the fact that you take joy in their naughty adventures thrills me no end!
Thank you *so* much for your beautiful feedback, it warms my heart immensely! *huge hugs* Bless you!
Last night after work I reread the whole story so i could remember. I was so engrossed I never heard my wife call me for dinner. So after being torn away to eat some wonderful sushi I jumped right back into it. I Love It! I was so sad when i reached the last page (I print out the good ones). The elements I really liked the most are the characters, not just because it's Harry or Hermione, but because you write them so real. You truly have a gift for describing/ feel/understanding emotions. When I read a lot of other fic's yes I'm happy when H/Hr finally get together, but when I read this I was in aww of it. I almost felt like an intruder on a deeply private and personal moment between these two (dorm scene). It was wonderful honestly. Another thing! I'm not the biggest fan of (fan-Fic)Ron, but I loved him in this story. I was loving to interplay between him and F.D. Then Lavender too was real and intensely human. Your level of detail and colour that you paint the scenes with is lovely in a way only a true artist can create. Please write more.
Sorry if a rambled on like a little fanboy, but your work is beautiful. Thank you
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Date: 2004-01-15 01:11 am (UTC)Shall read and review soon as :*
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Date: 2004-01-15 02:23 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-01-15 03:48 pm (UTC)I'm currently at the beginning of Chapter 3 and loving every single word. I'm specially enjoying your version of Ron and his love triangle with Fleur and Lavender... I love your take on these characters. I don't remember you writing such a Ron-centric fic before, but I think is great.
Expect a more detailed review via e-mail as soon as I'm done. :)
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Date: 2004-01-15 06:12 pm (UTC)O, how I love the characterisation in your stories, and how the mood is rarely too serious, there's a lightness to it, a similar kind of whimsy that's found in the books- I think that's the key right there, why your style has clicked so well with me. The dialogue is great too, I know when I'm reading that it wont be long before I'll have the giggles again (best example; "bags not taking his jocks off"- that's gold.)
Loved this story. I know all the previous fangirling doesn't do much else but look pretty, but I hope it at least encourages you to write more and more. :) I'm also friending you, to keep updated with your writing adventures. Thanks for sharing this!
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Date: 2004-01-15 06:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2004-01-15 06:39 pm (UTC)Thank you *so* much for your beautiful feedback, it warms my heart immensely! *huge hugs* Bless you!
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Date: 2004-01-16 06:39 am (UTC)Sorry if a rambled on like a little fanboy, but your work is beautiful. Thank you